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COMP 107 - How To Ride a Bike?

Riding a bike is pretty much the simplest thing you can learn in your life. It requires some basic steps, which shouldn’t be a hassle to the average person. You might want to consider buying a tricycle to teach you the fundamentals; steering and pedaling. When you’re ready, move up to a small bike with training wheels. Remember to use your body for balance, not your handle bars. Keep your handlebars completely straight across. First, put one foot up on your pedal. Immediately, lift up your other foot as you start to push the pedal with your foot. Just keep pedaling! Don’t worry about your balance. The rotation axis of the wheels moving forward will keep you upright. Do you think this paragraph is an A paper? My teacher is a grammar head. He skim the paper earlier mentioning it was too short... I revise it but there are only some manhy things you can write to learning how to ride a bike.... =/

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1. Don't forget to add - fall over and then get back on and try again and again. That's the way I learned.
2. 1---he is right. it is way too short 2---pretty much the simplest thing/ one of the more simple things 3---shouldn't be a hassle/ should not be that difficult for 4--teach you the fundamentals:steering and pedaling /...now is when you explain how to steer and how to pedal. these should be two separate paragraphs 5---put one foot up, lift other foot, push with foot/... you got me confused about which foot i am supposed to be using to do what. is the "other foot" just in the air, or is it on a pedal also, or did i lift it off the pedal 6--- you mentioned steering and then did not say anything about how it is done 7----if he saw your note about skim the paper, revise it, only some manhy , write to..... he would probably lower your grade some more 8---you can easily fill up a page on this subject, maybe even two pages, even if you know absolutely nothing about riding a bike