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Riding a bike is pretty much the simpliest thing you can learn in your life. It acquires basic steps that shouldn’t be much hassle to the average person. Memorize that you use your body to balance, not your handle bars. Keep them completely straight. First, you put one foot up on your pedal. Immediately, lift your other foot up as you start to push with the foot on the pedal. Just keep pedaling! Don’t worry about the balance, whereas the moving wheels going forward will keep you up. Im taking COMP 107 My English teacher is such a grammer head! Does the paragraph look good enough to receive an A. He told us to keep it simple, making sure everything is precise

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1. *simplest shouldn't be much of a hassle
2. You made a one gramatical eror that I can see, so my correction will be in capital ok. Riding a bike is pretty much the simpliest thing you can learn in your life. It acquires basic steps that shouldn’t be much hassle to the average person. Memorize that you use your body to balance, AND not your handle bars. Keep them completely straight. First, you put one foot up on your pedal. Immediately, lift your other foot up as you start to push with the foot on the pedal. Just keep pedaling! Don’t worry about the balance, whereas the moving wheels going forward will keep you up.
3. CORRECTIONS ARE IN BIG CAPITAL LETTERS... Riding a bike is PERHAPS THE MOST SIMPLE thing you can learn in your life. It REQUIRES some basic steps, WHICH shouldn’t be A hassle to the average person. REMEMBER TO use your body FOR balance, not your handle bars. Keep YOUR HANDLEBARS completely straight. First, PUT one foot up on your pedal. THEN, immediately lift UP YOUR other foot as you start to push THE PEDAL WITH YOUR FOOT. Just keep pedaling! Don’t worry about YOUR balance. THE ROTATION AXIS OF THE wheels MOVING forward will keep you UPRIGHT. Im taking COMP 107 My English teacher is such a GRAMMAR head! Does the paragraph look good enough to receive an A ? He told us to keep it simple, making sure everything is PRECISE.
4. Change this: Memorize that you use your body to balance, not your handle bars. Keep them completely straight. To this: Memorize that you use your body to balance Do not try to use your handle bars to balance; keep them completely straight. Change this: First, you put one foot up on your pedal. Immediately, lift your other foot up as you start to push with the foot on the pedal. Just keep pedaling! Don’t worry about the balance, whereas the moving wheels going forward will keep you up. To this: To begin riding , you put one foot up on your pedal. Immediately lift your other foot up as you start to push with the foot on the pedal. Just keep pedaling! Don’t worry about the balance; the moving wheels going forward will keep you balanced.