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Riding a bike is pretty much the simplest thing you can learn in your life. It requires some basic steps, which shouldn’t be a hassle to the average person. You might want to consider buying a tricycle to teach you the fundamentals; steering and pedaling. When you’re ready, buy a small bike with training wheels. Remember to use your body for balance, not your handle bars. Keep your handlebars completely straight across. First, put one foot up on your pedal. Immediately, lift up your other foot as you start to push the pedal with your foot. Just keep pedaling! Don’t worry about your balance. The rotation axis of the wheels moving forward will keep you upright. If you fall over, keep trying! My COMP 107 teacher is a real grammar head... I can't find any mistakes...Can U?

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1. Hello! I like the paragraph. It has a lot of good detail. I only noticed two errors. "First, put one foot up on your petal" I think place would sound better than put, even though that's not really a grammar error. "Immediately, lift" You don't need a comma unless you were to say Immediately after, lift. That's all I could find. Reading it aloud can help you find small errors that you don't notice if you just read it in your head. Good luck! ~~The Hawk~~
2. forgot to indent but nothing much besides that