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Perfect Skateboarding Day Riding on the street smooth as can be Skating with confidence, nothing stops me The wheels skim the pavement turning them black Skating determined on the right track Strolling along while wind passes by Crouching down for a no comply Watching my bearings in the wheels they abide Leaning my weight from side to side Gaining speed I stroll to the rail Catch right on as I slide my tail Keeping my balance I grind to the end But not forgetting there’s room to amend Strolling on and off the curb Skating is my life long verb Skate up the driveway making my way This was the perfect skateboarding day

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1. i liked it deffinetly much better than i could do lol! Good job keep it up
2. very good!! you got some real talent!!!! keep on writting poems and othr stuff
3. it's fantastic