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Which Story Should I Write?

I love to write stories, but I have two great ideas and can't decide which book to writre: The Moonscape Trilogy or The Shadower Saga. Both are fantasy stroke love stories. About Moonscape: Ivy-Rose Green has always loved books. But she has a special talent. Each book has and after story, the remainder of the character’s lives after the last page. Only Ivy-Rose knows that no story ever ends, and that when a tale is written, the characters are as real as herself. She hears the books whisper their stories and after-stories, and every bookstore and library is full of noise to her. Ivy’s favourite books are the Moonscape Trilogy, which she can never read because of all the description. If Ivy reads too much, and understands a character completely, she finds herself inside the book. One day, she walks into Borders, and picks up The Complete Moonscape Trilogy. She reads her favourite part, in which her favourite character, Jasper Garnet, is trapped in a jail cell thinking of his life. But Ivy gets too involved, and is sucked into the book. She and Jasper meet, along with the other main character, Nora. But Ivy finds herself falling in love with Jasper, a love that could tear apart the thin line between fact and fiction… Book One: Twisting the Plot: Ivy is sucked into the Moonscape Trilogy, falling in love with Jasper in the process. Book Two: Secrets Must Be Kept: A mysterious man walks into Borders and picks up the book Ivy was sucked into. This book tells of Ivy’s story as well as Jasper’s and Nora’s. He also enters the book, putting everything Ivy and Jasper hold near and dear at risk… Book Three: Remember Who You Are: Ivy has spent five years with Jasper in Moonscape. At the fourth year, she forgot her entire life. Jasper convinces her she is a orphaned Starchaser that had an accident in a bookshop, causing her to lose her memory. Ivy believes him. They become engaged and have a daughter named Emily. But Jasper is making a terrible mistake in keeping his fiancé’ s identity secret, for the final book is approaching, a book in which Jasper’s death is written… An extract of Chapter One of Twisting the Plot: The books have always whispered to me. At eighteen years old, it’s easy to tune them out. I was born Ivy-Rose Green (my parents seemed to have a cruel sense of humour), along with my twin sister Kitty. Ever since that day I came into the world the books have talked. At first I thought everyone could hear them, but when Kitty couldn’t read like I could, or know exactly how the characters sounded, or not hear anyone speak while she read, I knew I was special. I found out that after the final word of each book, the story continued. Every character was as real as myself, and their life carried on after the story was finished. But it was only me that could read the after-stories, or even knew they existed. Books slowly became my whole life. The other kids all thought I was strange, but the stories were people too. At least, they seemed to be, but no-one else thought so. Kitty was the only one that knew my secret. I’d be treat as a freak if anyone found out. The Shadower Saga: A girl called Rose is in love with a Shadower named Edward. A Shadower is a person that died, and came back. They can't sleep or breathe, their heart doesn't beat, they can't age, and the only way to kill one is to strike a direct blow to it's heart. Also, for each Shaower, there is a key. The key is a human, and if they take that human's soul, the Shadower can live a normal life again, as if they never died. Edward has been dead 100 years and will be seventeen forever unless he finds his key, but that doesn't come in beetween him and Rose. Edward's sister, Aleeyah, is a good vampire, and she helps them out of sticky situations that arise in the books. For instance: A crazed evil vampire, Ella, wanting to kill Rose in revenge for Edward killing her brother. A Reaper, Jacob, wanting to kill Rose to restore the balance of the world. A werewolf trying to force Rose to marry him. Ella returning with incredibly strong witch powers. An Extract of Chapter One of Shadower: I wasn’t looking where I was going at all as I walked, and the rain was getting really frustrating. So it wasn’t surprising when I tripped. I held out my hands instinctively, but I needn’t of. Someone caught me. I looked up into my saviour’s face, the rain splattering my own. My saviour’s skin was pale too, paler than my own, and it was icier than the rain to touch. His hair was light brown, but it was darker with wet and plastered to his head. He was very handsome, but soaked. His only protection from the rain was a navy body-warmer. It was his eyes though, that caught my attention. They were black. Deep, deep black, and they seemed to echo with the sad song of centuries past, swimming with the ghost of the boy’s own past. His eyes did not just catch my own, they frightened me too. And I found I couldn’t look away. It was entrancing. My hood had sli There are actually three books in the The Moonscape Trilogy, entitled and listed in order: 1. Twisting the Plot 2. Secrets Must Be Kept 3. Remember Who You Are

Public Comments

1. wow thats alot of words ummmmmmmmmmmmmmm...Twilight!! ;D
2. Write both of them. I always have more than one book going at once so that if I get stuck on one I can work on the other.
3. Twilight
4. Why don't you ask Stephenie Meyer?
5. Wow that was a lot of.....twilight. Copier! Just kidding but seriously all the stories do sound a lot like twilight or have something in them that happened in Twilight.
6. Write the Moonscape Trilogy. It caught and held my attention, I thought the part i read was really good. And to be honest, The shadower Saga is basically The Twilight Saga. It has the names and everything, down to the black eyes. Basically choose the Original idea- The Moonscape Trilogy. I actually found it really interesting! Hope I helped. (:
7. Wow. Um...I'd suggest neither, considering they sound very much alike books that have already, sadly, been written. IE, Inkheart and Twilight.
8. hey you could get some tips from Steph Meyer!!! like omg get original!
9. The first is far better, the second idea is too much like twilight and it isn't as original as the first. I would read the first idea you had.
10. The Moonscape trilogy for sure! It rocks! Um, I was wondering... Maybe you should consider paragraphing more and using Spell Check. Other than that, the Moonscape trilogy sounds awesome! But there's something I want to know, which book is it that Jasper dies? (The third one?) Perhaps you could consider changing the title of the series, because it's not really a trilogy in reality, is it? It's just describing the trilogy that Ivy read.