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How much mistakes can you spot?(20 points)?

the following starting for this particular novel is FILLED with mistakes, some are grammatical others are just sentences that don't make sense. the person who corrects the most mistakes gets 20 points (cuz im asking this question twice) so if you answered it once just copy and paste you answer to the copy of this question. Help! Quick I need help! Mason screamed as his foot got stuck between two metal bars on an old railway track. He tried shaking his leg rapidly but it only caused more pain. “Linda my shoe is stuck on something”. Linda finally heard his voice and immediately ran towards him without looking to see if there were any alphahunters nearby. Unaware of what might be in his surroundings, Mason kept on crying for help hoping that either Linda or Redman heard him. Linda ran quickly through the debris and junk of what use to be a research facility around 50 years ago. She tried to maintain her balance and not trip or get caught on anything, “I’m coming just give me a second” she shouted nervously. She finally got to him and instantly started helping him pull his leg out. She kept applying excess force to his feet but it didn’t seem to get any looser. “Linda hurry, I’m getting really scared” said Mason nervously. “I know they are near”. “Stop worrying I’ll get you out” replied Linda. She stopped trying to pull his leg and instead started hurling her hand towards the metal bars. The bars still did not loosen at all. Linda kept getting more and more anxious and frustrated; it was then when she started getting paranoid as she realized this might not be some random debris from the old facility. That in fact it may be a trap set by Betazars, It was a t the moment when a cold chill ran through her spine. More and more worry ran through her thoughts, “what’s wrong, why is it not coming off” cried Mason, now with drips of sweat running through his face like mini rivers. “You know what, Wait by I’ll go and get Redman” said Linda. “What! And leave me hear alone! Stuck on some bar! Helpless if even the weakest alphahunter comes by!” shrilled Mason anxiously.” Look, stop worrying”. “I promise I’ll come back”. Meanwhile in the underground floor of the facility was Redman wondering and searching for any signs of human or alien life. He was alone, despite this he knew he shouldn’t have. But the reality of it was he didn’t have enough troops to even protect his survivors from aliens let alone go into the robot’s territories, so taking more than Linda and Mason on this mission was not an option. He walked carefully in the dark of what seemed to be some sort of warehouse. He took out his flashlight and turned it on to see his surroundings more clearly. At first glance he had some difficulty identifying what was around him. After a few seconds he came to realize that the warehouse was filled with boxes and cartons. He didn’t know what they contained as their labels were hard to see due to the thick dust that carpeted the surface of almost everything in the warehouse. He went towards one of the boxes and scraped the dust off with his hands to see the writings on the label. He leaned his body closer to see the reading more clearly “Blue arc medical equipment” it had written on its main label. “Thank goodness” he whispered to himself. He knew he found what he was looking for, and now he can call Linda and Mason to the facility. But it was at that moment he heard a strange noise coming from upstairs. He paused silently for a moment and then turned off his flashlight. A sense of panic and strong fear shivered through his mind for a few seconds. He waited a few more seconds to gain the courage to shout to whatever might have been coming towards him. “Who is there” he shouted, but he knew the more important question was what was there, because if it was an alien or robot it wouldn’t have bothered to answer. Despite the various possibilities he still had to shout out loud because he knew most robots aren’t equipped with night vision, and that included all walking robots. And if it were an Alien chances were he could take it down; that is of course only if it choose to be hostile. He stood silently for a few more seconds, waiting for an answer and then all of a sudden he heard another sound coming from the stairs. He took a couple of steps towards the stairs so he could get a glimpse of what he what about to encounter. Then finally to his relief he heard a voice shout, a human voice, It was Linda’s. “Redman are you there?” shouted Linda. Redman quickly turned on his flashlight and yelled “yah I am over here”. Redman took a deep breath in relief and laughed slightly for a moment and said “you know despite all these years of fighting Alphahunters and betazars, And having to take down white-valkyries I still get that chill when I feel like am around them" he said nervously. "Yeah it’s hard to get use to” replied Linda quietly. "Mason got stuck on some metal bars, he needs your help". "Alright, good news though" sa

Public Comments

1. Lots, and the first one is in the question.
2. Wow! That is WAY too much cheating for me to help you with, but I'll tell you this much...spotted ONE in the title question. Mistakes is plural, much is singular. How MANY mistakes can you spot? and, you need to do your OWN homework, or you will continue to make stupid mistakes like that one.
3. 22 mistakes
4. dart is partially right but the explanation about many and much is not a fact of singular and plural; many is used with things that can be counted and much when is an unknown amount (sugar, water, salt, etc.) second mistake also in the question is cuz, you know that it's because. Talking about the novel I preferr not to correct and count them because there are many.
5. Please tell me that you're just doing this for fun, and that this isn't actually your homework that you're attempting to get other people to do for you. Please.
6. Your luck I'm bored. well I found Help! Quick I need help! Mason screamed as his foot got stuck between two metal bars on an old railway track. It should be. "Help, quick, I need help!" Mason screamed, as his foot got stuck between the two metal bars, on an old railway track. You needed four comma's, one exclamation point, and the word the in the sentence, it makes it sound better. He tried shaking his leg rapidly but it only caused more pain. It should be. He tried shaking his leg, rapidly, but it only caused him more pain. You needed two comma's, and him in the sentence, it makes it sound better. “Linda my shoe is stuck on something”. It should be. "Linda, my shoe is stuck on something." You needed a comma, and your period goes first at the end. Linda finally heard his voice and immediately ran towards him without looking to see if there were any alphahunters nearby. It should be. Linda finally heard his voice, and immediately ran towards him, without looking to see if there were any alpha hunters nearby. You needed two comma's and needed to space out the word alpha hunters. Unaware of what might be in his surroundings, Mason kept on crying for help hoping that either Linda or Redman heard him. It should be. Unaware, of what might be in his surroundings, Mason kept crying for help, hoping that either Linda or Redman heard him. I'm not sure if Redman is a name or what, but anyway, you needed two comma's and didn't need a word. Linda ran quickly through the debris and junk of what use to be a research facility around 50 years ago. It should be. Linda, ran quickly through the debris and junk, of what use to be a research facility, around fifty years ago. You needed three comma's and need to spell fifty instead of putting 50. She tried to maintain her balance and not trip or get caught on anything, It should be. She tried to maintain her balance, and not trip or get caught on anything. You needed a comma and a period and not a comma at the end. “I’m coming just give me a second” she shouted nervously. It should be. "I'm coming, just give me a second." she shouted nervously. You needed a comma and a period.