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I need help with a conclusion sentence for my To kill a mockingbird essay. Its on small town life is good.?

my conclusion so far: Maycomb is the perfect town for Jem and Scout to grow up in, because it contains everything a child needs to have a happy, successful life. Family will always be there, no matter how much a person has messed their lives up. Friends, if they are true, will also be there for you. Also, mystery adds to a town’s unique nature, within its residents. Small towns such as Maycomb, also contain lesson that need to be learned throughout life. And lastly, small town life is good for the development of any child. ,

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1. Overall Maycomb is a pretty good place to live, with a couple flaws, but every place has atleast 1 flaw.
2. Your conclusion doesn't seem to pull everything together. You're just listing things you probably talked about in your body paragraphs. You need to end with a sentence that comes back to your point that Maycomb is a good town for the kids to live in. Pull together the evidence and broadly state that Jem's and Scout's residence in Maycomb developed their maturity, opened their minds..... (or something along those lines)
3. Maycomb could be my town. It could be your town. It could be Anytown, USA.
4. I hope that you don't mind that I took the liberty to proof read it for you. Here are the changes I would make: 1.NO comma after "in" in the first sentence. 2. "Up" goes AFTER "messed" in sentence 2. 3. The sentence that begins "Also mystery...": NO comma after "nature." In the next sentence: A comma goes AFTER "towns" and AFTER Malcomb. An "s" should go on "lesson." Kill " And lastly." Simply write: " Small town life is good for the development of any child. *The "beauty is in the eye of the beholder."* * My addition.