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What other way do you prefer to write this sentences?

Here are two different senteces. How can you make the connection in each individual sentence? When you write an answer, there should be two different sentences. You may change the words and phrase to make sense. You also may want to make as short as you can. His grandmother’s belief that education is the key to a successful life and respect others. Living with his stepmother created immense pressure, but he respected his stepmother by his grandmother's belief of respecting others. What else should I include with "respect others"? His grandmother said respect everyone even your enemies, but I do not want to use word enemies. How do you write this two different sentece on one idea.

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1. his grandmother's belief that education is the key to successful life and must respect others made him respect his stepmother though living with her created immense pressure in him.
2. His grandmother strongly believed that education was the key to a successful life and to be respectful of others hence, although his living with his stepmother created intolerable pressure, he still respected the stepmother because of his grandmothers wisdom.