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Here are two different senteces. How can you make the connection in each individual sentence? When you write an answer, there should be two different sentences. You may change the words and phrase to make sense. You also may want to make as short as you can. His grandmother’s belief that education is the key to a successful life and respect others. Living with his stepmother created immense pressure, but he respected his stepmother by his grandmother's belief of respecting others. What else should I include with "respect others"? His grandmother said respect everyone even your enemies, but I do not want to use word enemies. How do you write this two different sentece on one idea.
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- Because of His grandmother instilled in him the beliefs that education is the key to a successful life and respect others, he respected his stepmother even though living with his her caused him immense pressure.
- If his grandmother believed that education and respect were keys to a successful life, then I would rewrite this way: "His grandmother believed that education and respect for all were the keys to a successful life. Although living with his stepmother created immense pressure, he abode by those values and gave her respect." If his grandmother believed in TWO values, "education is the key to a successful life" AND "respect others," I would rewrite it this way: "His grandmother believed in two key values. One was that education was the key to a successful life and the other was that everyone was worthy of respect. Although living with his stepmother created immense pressure, he abode by those values and gave her respect."
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