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i gave 10 point for 20 monday i need.please correct any thing wrong and make it stronger for me please many thanks Formal Report on Time Management Terms of Reference: I have been asked to write own timetable to improve my own time management through better planning; prioritising; delegating; controlling my environment; understanding myself and identifying what I will change about my habits, routines and attitude by my tutor Julie. I set up a program at least between 10 to 12 out of 168 hours a week for study time. I filled two timetables, one of them is before starting college and the other one is a day when I was at college. Procedure: I set a program for myself where I allocated two hours each morning to working on the daily homework, and all my activities during that time have to relate to the homework. Generally I have worked out and prepared weekly activity schedule plan that I will able to control the time allocated for my tasks in every single hour. Finding: I found it is a good idea to have own time management and the time management is a key to success planning as well as protecting the planned time and then stick to it. It is chiefly about conditioning our environment, rather than allowing our environment to condition us. I set up 83.5 % of my time that can not be change daily (Fixed) and have to follow it as a rule, it includes: •Sleeping •Cooking •Eating •Bath/Shower •College time •Washing/Ironing • Although, I decided to study 40.5% of my time which contains: •Doing homework •Researching topics •Reviewing the subjects •And other tasks Also made 38% of my time flexible as (moveable time) means I can do the things which I need to do but I did not make a time for it suck as •Urgent tasks •Cleaning Meanwhile I left 7%. Of my time extra I called (Leisure time) that I can enjoy it with my family to: •Get a rest •Have fun Conclusion: I think time management is one of the important things that we can achieve our goals by, if I have a right timetable to follow so I can prepare mine to obtain the goals. As I have family and a baby, means I have more responsibility to cope with. It helps me prioritise my work once I have a list of things that I need to tackle and gain control it is easer to know where to go and what to do first. I also feel it is a good idea that I can balance my life with my study time. As a result I learnt to set my goals daily, which I would have to accomplish by the end of the day. I discovered that it was critical that I know exactly what I was doing. I established that time management is an essential skill that helps me to keep my work under control, at the same time that it helps me keep stress to a minimum. I want to declare that before the college I had to rush and mix my works together to do them daily, however now I have plan and schedule for things sensibly and logically and then I want to mention that I try to kill several birds with one stone by my new time slot regarding to do things on time nicely and perfectly Once schedule it's easy to keep it going; many of the slots will repeat. You'll also notice monthly patterns too Recommendations: •I recommend 2 hours in the early morning, is great to memorise some subject which needs to. •I think 2 hours time slot daily is nice to motivate my self my doing some house work and enjoy playing with my little. •I think we cannot discover new oceans until we have the courage to lose sight of the shore so I think I have to work hard if I want to achieve my goals. •I feel happy if I try learning more daily with doing more homework and reviewing, the more I learn the more confident I will become. •I think separating 1 to 2 hours daily can develop a balanced program that provides pleasurable leisure activities as well as work. If I feel pleasant, I will add more fun in my daily schedule. •I assume, if I can accomplish even part of my schedule, it will give me some satisfaction points.

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1. It is quite good, but a lot of punctuation was missing. (Something missing in the conclusions section - check it.) Terms of Reference: I have been asked to write a timetable to improve my own time management through better planning, prioritising, delegating, controlling my environment, understanding myself and identifying what I could change about my habits, routines and attitude by my tutor, Julie. I set up a programme of at least 10 to 12 out of 168 hours a week for study time. I filled in two timetables, one of them is before starting college and the other one is a day when I was at college. Procedure: I set a programme for myself where I allocated two hours each morning to working on the daily homework, and all my activities during that time have to relate to the homework. Generally, I have worked out and prepared a weekly activity schedule plan from which I will be able to control the time allocated for my tasks in every single hour. Findings: I found that it is a good idea to have own-time management, and that time management is a key to successful planning, as well as protecting the planned time and then of course, sticking to it. It is chiefly about conditioning our environment, rather than allowing our environment to condition us. I set up 83.5 % of my time that cannot be changed daily, and have to follow it as a rule, it includes: •Sleeping •Cooking •Eating •Bath/Shower •College time •Washing/Ironing I decided to study 40.5% of my time which contains: •Doing homework •Researching topics •Reviewing the subjects •Other tasks I also made 38% of my time flexible (moveable time) this means that I can do the things which I need to do, but I did not make a time for, such as: •Urgent tasks •Cleaning Meanwhile I left 7%. Of my time as extra. I called it leisure time, that I can enjoy with my family to: •Rest/relax •Have fun Conclusion: I think time management is one of the important things that we can achieve our goals by, with the right timetable to follow, so I want to prepare mine to obtain these goals. As I have family and a baby, it means that I have more responsibility to cope with. It helps me prioritise my work, once I have a list of things that I need to tackle and gain control of. It is easer to know where to go and what to do first. I also feel that it is a good idea to balance my life with my study time. As a result, I learnt to set my goals daily, which I would have to accomplish by the end of the day. I discovered that it was critical to know exactly what I was doing. I established that time management is an essential skill that helps me to keep my work under control. At the same time, it helps me keep stress to a minimum. I want to declare that before college, I had to rush and mix my work together, daily. However, now I have plans and schedules for things; sensibly and logically. I want to mention that I try to kill several birds with one stone, by my new time slot, to do things on time nicely and perfectly. Once scheduled, it is easy to keep it going; many of the slots will repeat. You will also notice monthly patterns too. Recommendations: • I recommend that 2 hours in the early morning, is good to memorise some subjects which need attention. •I think that a 2 hour time slot daily is ideal to motivate my self for doing some house work and enjoy playing with my little. <LITTLE WHAT?????> • I think that we cannot discover new oceans until we have the courage to lose sight of the shore, so I think I have to work hard if I want to achieve my goals. • I feel happy if I try studying daily, doing more homework and reviewing; the more I learn the more confident I will become. •I think that separating 1 to 2 hours daily can develop a balanced programme that provides pleasurable leisure activities as well as work. If I feel good, I will add more fun in my daily schedule. • I assume, if I can accomplish even part of my schedule, it will give me some satisfaction points.
2. What about the other 16.5% I found that it was a good idea to develope my own time management as it is the key to successful planning as well as protecting the planned time that needs to be adhered to. It is chiefly about conditioning our environment, rather than allowing the environment to condition us. I set up 83.5 % of my time, daily, that can not be changed (fixed) and has to be followed as a rule, it includes: • Sleeping • Cooking • Eating • Bath/Shower • College time • Washing/Ironing I decided to study 40.5% of my fixed time containing: • Doing homework • Researching topics • Reviewing the subjects • And other tasks I made 38% of my time flexible, as moveable time means I can do the things which I need to that do not require a set time: • Urgent tasks • Cleaning Meanwhile I left 7%. of my time, I called leisure time, that I can enjoy with my family: • Get a rest • Have fun Conclusion: I think time management is one of the important things that can be used to achieve my goals. I have a family and a baby which means I have more responsibility. With a correct timetable to follow, I can prepare to obtain my goals; it helps me prioritise my work. Utilising a list of things that I need to tackle and control, makes it is easer to know where to go and what to do first. I also feel it is a good idea to balance my life and my study time. As a result I learned to set my goals daily, and know what to accomplish by the end of the day. I discovered that it was critical that I knew exactly what I was doing. I recognised that time management is an essential skill that helps me keep my work under control and, at the same time, it helps me keep stress to a minimum. I want to declare that before the college I had to rush and mix my work together, to do them daily, now I have planned a schedule, I can do things sensibly and logically. Once scheduled it's easy to continue; many of the slots repeat. You'll also notice I have monthly patterns too. Recommendations: • I recommend 2 hours in the early morning, to memorise some subject as required. • I think a 2 hour time slot, daily, is nice to motivate my self my doing some house work and enjoy playing with my little boy/girl. • I think I have to work hard if I want to achieve my goals. • I feel happy if I learn more daily, do more homework and review; the more I learn the more confident I will become. • I think separating 1 to 2 hours daily can develop a balanced program that provides pleasurable leisure activities as well as work. If I feel happy, it will add more fun to my daily schedule. • If I can adhere to every part of my schedule, it will give me great satisfaction.