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Is my rap decent or should i just quit it rate 1-10.I dont rap about just life i like to make peaple think?

Is my rap decent or should i just quit it rate 1-10.I dont rap about just life i like to make peaple think? these both were freestyles Stay down for my come up im only 14 but you still shouldn't run up my circle got them choppas no pave low when i get famous ima give the crowd what they paid for camo shorts pair a chuck ts and a snapback let me throw on a white tee not out of school yet but im already planning what i might be ,im just praying for another day that i might see life'ses a trip im just tryna stay on my two feet im not high butt im on cloud nine i feel too good the worlds mine fifteminutesess of fame i think im bouta get more time you lost your girl she was a ten so i guess you dropped a dime on the ramp of life on four wheels just trying to keep balanced its a kick push day now yahoo answers tell me if i got any talents. and one that is clever to me Theres only one I like a cyclops i got homies so i can say its we im not a follower so theres no need to tweet me ima alphabet guy im just tryna B me thats why yall other dudes cant C me im whats next like d,e. Additional Details the last part wasnt a verse i was explaining the second freestyle 1. i meant in the first line that theres only 1 i as in me and then i say like a cyclops which only has 1 eye 2 then third of course you follow peaple on twitter 3 next i go on to use letters as in words like you cant C me or B=Be=Bee and i was freestyling so sorry for spelling

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1. I would rate 9, because you got some nice rhymes. The thing is... It seems as if you just randomely put those rhymes around. at first its like 1(every 1 rhymes) 1 1 1 Then its like 1 1 1 0 1 2 0 2 See how it's kind of random? Also, some of your rhymes are the same words, and I don't really appreciate those as rhymes.
2. If Lil Twist quits i'll give you a call #Weezy
3. did you post this earlier? I think you did? bt anyways your really talented.. I don't get the very last part when you say "im whats next like d,e." ooo wait nvm.. i'm slow.. anyways don't quit you got alot going for yourself(:
4. 8 man your pretty good you got skillz
5. good stuff just need to put on a video and make a beat for it .............http://customizebeats.blogspot.com/